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Companion Kate

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BrownCoat_Tabz

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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 9:36 pm Post subject: |
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Oooh shiny! _________________ Tabz, Slayer of the Podcasts.
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BrownCoat_Tabz

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Boukman

Joined: 17 Jan 2007 Posts: 16777215
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:13 am Post subject: Shiny! |
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Loved this intense and clever Pilot episode discussion.
Now where can I hear the rated 18+ version? Hell, Triple X Reaver Talk even  |
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Dani

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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:39 am Post subject: |
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I have a question, were they watching the episode while they discussed?
cos they ofter say, 'oh what happens next?' But then again they kinda talk like they are watching it. |
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Dani

Joined: 08 Jul 2006 Posts: 186 Location: Hemel Hempstead
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 7:03 am Post subject: |
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They didnt mention the part when Mal tells Simon that Kaylee is dead
Did it get forgotten? |
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kbachelder

Joined: 10 Jun 2005 Posts: 511 Location: South of Boston, MA
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Lushy

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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:11 pm Post subject: |
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OOOOOOOH!
Thanks! I will have to check it out... of course not while I am here.. working at my job!  _________________ Miranda
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Lushy

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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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| Dani wrote: | They didnt mention the part when Mal tells Simon that Kaylee is dead
Did it get forgotten? |
Yes unfortunately we missed talking about that scene.
Here's the scoop on what we did to record. Both Trampas and I watched the episode independently... once we had, Trampas had a little outline of what happened and what he wanted to mention.
We both hopped onto skype and recorded our half of the conversation... because of time zones and families and all that good stuff we were recording late at night... So we started on one night and recorded for nearly an hour and a half talking about things that are in the first part of the episode... once it hit like 2am and we still had half the pilot to discuss.. we stopped and decided to finish the conversation the next night.
Somehow is stopping and starting the conversation we missed that scene, thinking we had already spoken about it in the first part of the conversation.
We didn't watch the episode while we recorded, though it may seem that way because of how we sound.
This segment is a work in progress. Trampas and I weren't really sure about how to go through the episode because this one is a double episode and really sets up a lot of things that you will see in the future episodes of the show and ultimately the movie.
Thanks for all the feedback guys! We appreciate it greatly! _________________ Miranda
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Dani

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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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well, i think yall still did a great job, its just me being picky  |
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Jayhawk35
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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I just wanted to add my 2 cents....I thoroughly enjoyed it. You did a great job of bringing up the highlights, and adding your own thoughts and personal experiences associated with watching the show.
It made for a great couple of days at work to make the time pass by a little more quickly with an occasional chuckle and smile on face!
Thanks! I can't wait to hear more!
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AmazonGrrl

Joined: 19 Oct 2005 Posts: 44
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 6:42 pm Post subject: |
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I almost threw on the DVD to watch while you did this quasi-commentary ...but the show is so engrained (?) into my memory that I just listened to y'all speak.
I must say that I'm surprised that you didn't know that the Alliance ship was called the Dortmunder...and that you thought the Crybaby was a barrel!
The Crybaby is, actually, much much smaller than a barrel.
It's inside a coffee can.
It even says "coffee" or "caffinated" on the can.
A suggestion for future Firefly episode chats:
When you're watching, have the subtitles on so you know what is being said.
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"Creativity lies at the interface of discipline and chaos." -- Donna Shirley, manager of Mars Exploration Program |
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Dragonhelm
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 30
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| AmazonGrrl wrote: | | I must say that I'm surprised that you didn't know that the Alliance ship was called the Dortmunder |
If you check out the humor episode, you'll note that the Dortmunder was used for Ops.
| Quote: | ...and that you thought the Crybaby was a barrel!
The Crybaby is, actually, much much smaller than a barrel.
It's inside a coffee can.
It even says "coffee" or "caffinated" on the can. |
Huh! For some reason, it looked like a barrel to me. Having it as a coffee can makes it funnier.
Anyway, I enjoyed doing this episode, and thanks to Miranda for making me sound good.  _________________ Trampas Whiteman
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Plastic Rocket
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Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 10:04 pm Post subject: |
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I loved the discussion. There were parts of me that wanted it to be an alternate DVD commentary, but there was something so sincere in two people simply recalling the episode...awesome stuff.
I suppose it would be an interesting test to actually have the episode running...food for thought perhaps. _________________
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MrDave

Joined: 09 Feb 2007 Posts: 189
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 4:56 pm Post subject: Observations |
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First, I am not trying to be critical I am trying to be constructive, I really do admire (and appreciate) the effort that goes into a program like this.
I had to wonder as I listened to this who your intended audience was. Was it long-time browncoats who have memorized all the episodes or perhaps more casual new converts who are looking for a fan perspective? For newer fans I can see the appeal for something like this, but as a long-time browncoat I found myself constantly thiking "is this an audio description for the blind?" I have seen this episode so many times I KNOW what is happening in each scene with little or no prompting.
I am reminded of a season TWO Buffy commentary by David Fury who said something about doing "Buffy for the blind". And thats what I felt like I was listening to..."Firefly for the blind"
Here's what I expected (and to be honest there were a few nuggets of this, but I really was hungry for more).
Trampas: "Opening Scene Serenity Valley. Miranda tell me what it was about this scene that you most remember."
Miranda: "I was struck by the fact that the Mal Reynolds we meet here is never seen again throughout the series. He's an alien to the Mal we know and love."
Trampas : "I know what you mean. He's very different from the Mal we get to know throughout the series. Interestingly enough he's a lot more like the Mal from Serenity. There are elements in there."
Miranda: "Absolutely! What do you most remember about this scene?"
Trampas: "Oh that's a tough one. Probably the look on Mal's face as the Alliance ships descend unimpeded into the valley at the end."
And so on.
The idea here is that WE know the episode and we have our own opinions, what we (okay what *I*) want to hear is something that will make me go "Wow, I had never thought about it like that."
Having said that, only one more observation to make:
Please refrain from using these phrases: (I am not quoting exactly but offering examples of which there were many in the podcast)
"And Ummmmmm..." as in the phrase "...and ummmmmmm he says 'We are too pretty to die'."
This could be edited out; it is dead air; and it makes your opinions carry less gravity and authority because you sound less sure.
"And Like" as in the phrase "...and, like, she was so tough and hard."
This is just an annoying language construction. If you are building a simile then it is okay, but generally people aren't; they are making a direct comparison. "I am a leaf on the wind" is a simile... but "I am, like, a leaf on the wind" just sounds silly.
"And Then" as in the phrase "...and then the ship went 'Zoom!'"
I am reminded of the way children tell stories when I hear this. "And then he...and then he...and then he..." I immediately tune out whatever comes after.
Don't get the idea that I didn't like your two-part commentary, I did. I just was moved to point out ways in which it can be pushed to be an extraordinary commentary that I would go out of my way to listen to rather than one I listen to becasue it came through my feed. |
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Thad

Joined: 04 May 2006 Posts: 124 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 5:50 pm Post subject: Re: Observations |
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| MrDave wrote: | | For newer fans I can see the appeal for something like this, but as a long-time browncoat I found myself constantly thiking "is this an audio description for the blind?" I have seen this episode so many times I KNOW what is happening in each scene with little or no prompting. |
I have to admit that occured to me as well...
| MrDave wrote: | "And Like" as in the phrase "...and, like, she was so tough and hard."
This is just an annoying language construction. If you are building a simile then it is okay, but generally people aren't; they are making a direct comparison. "I am a leaf on the wind" is a simile... but "I am, like, a leaf on the wind" just sounds silly.
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Actually, I'm prettu sure that "I am a leaf on the wind" is a metaphor and "I am like a leaf on the wind" is a simile. _________________ Cheers,
Thad
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MrDave

Joined: 09 Feb 2007 Posts: 189
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 7:50 pm Post subject: Re: Observations |
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| Thad wrote: | | MrDave wrote: | "And Like" as in the phrase "...and, like, she was so tough and hard."
This is just an annoying language construction. If you are building a simile then it is okay, but generally people aren't; they are making a direct comparison. "I am a leaf on the wind" is a simile... but "I am, like, a leaf on the wind" just sounds silly.
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Actually, I'm prettu sure that "I am a leaf on the wind" is a metaphor and "I am like a leaf on the wind" is a simile. |
You are correct, sir. I am a typists/proofreader's nightmare becasue I don't always proof what I write first. I missed the word 'like' in the first example. |
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Companion Kate

Joined: 27 Jan 2005 Posts: 2014 Location: UK
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:59 pm Post subject: Re: Observations |
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| MrDave wrote: | "And Ummmmmm..." as in the phrase "...and ummmmmmm he says 'We are too pretty to die'."
This could be edited out |
I'm afraid that's not so. The rest of your comments were great, and really useful, and we can use comments like that to guide how these things evolve in the future, but as far as the editing is concerned, there are some things that we're simply stuck with.
The problem is, this is a bonus show. Claire and I edit the Signal proper, but we really don't have time to edit bonus shows as well, except crudely. Certainly not on the level of cutting out individual ums and ahs in two tracks that have to be synched. (We do that for the real Signal, of course). If you want the segment fully edited, then we'd have to pull it into the regular Signal, at the expense of something else.
Sorry about that, but bonus shows have to involve minimal work for us, or you just won't get them at all.  _________________
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Companion Kate

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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 12:27 am Post subject: Re: Observations |
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| Thad wrote: | | MrDave wrote: | "And Like" as in the phrase "...and, like, she was so tough and hard."
This is just an annoying language construction. If you are building a simile then it is okay, but generally people aren't; they are making a direct comparison. "I am a leaf on the wind" is a simile... but "I am, like, a leaf on the wind" just sounds silly.
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Actually, I'm prettu sure that "I am a leaf on the wind" is a metaphor and "I am like a leaf on the wind" is a simile. |
So far as I can tell, the part of speech of the word "like" in that phrase was interjection, and the interjection was a parenthesis. (That's what the commas are for in the original quote above). So you can't interpret the phrase as though the commas weren't there. Feel free to complain about the overuse of such interjections, but parenthetical interjections do not modify the surrounding grammar. "I am, like, a leaf on the wind" means exactly the same thing as "I am a leaf on the wind", but take the commas away and everything changes. (Whoa - over the top grammar geekiness there!) _________________
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BrownCoat_Tabz

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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 1:30 am Post subject: |
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I don't mind the umms (I edit out some of my own on my podcast, but this is a DISCUSSION... people um, say "like" and use sounds to illustrate what they're saying in real life). Miranda is just too cute not to let her say zoom!
I will say this, there's quite a few Whedonites out there who do reviews of shows (i.e Buffcast, Angel Investigtions, the WhedonCast, Cool Refreshing Zima, and etc.)
And it always seems to work best when people DON'T play the DVD while they're recording. What happens if you do is you get a lot of silence as they get wrapped up in the show... heheee
(same is true of some DVD commentaries I've heard).
Maybe having a basic outline of questions for the reviewers to think about when they watch the DVD so they know what's coming when they chat about it later would be helpful... Or just giving the people talking the general idea for them to say "My favorite part about this scene was XYZ.. what was yours?" That way the other person can formulate an idea of what to talk about, rather than being caught off guard...
Regardless, I think they're shiny and of COURSE every Browncoat alive will have their own "dang wish you would have talked about this" but if we all talked about every tiny bit of the show we'd never get out of an episode alive. _________________ Tabz, Slayer of the Podcasts.
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Companion Kate

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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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...and of course we'd be quite happy to have some of you guys take part in future Deep Geekings. It doesn't have to be just Signal crew.
MrDave? _________________
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MrDave

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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 2:58 pm Post subject: |
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| Companion Kate wrote: | ...and of course we'd be quite happy to have some of you guys take part in future Deep Geekings. It doesn't have to be just Signal crew.
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I have to admit to being tempted. My wife and I do this very thing to amuse ourselves from time to time. Whether or not I would be brave enough to do it for the world is another matter. I promise to think about it.
I didn't want to come off snarky about the episodes. I really did like them, but at some point you have to point out what you don't like about the things you love in order for things to improve. God bless you all for the Signal and thanks Trampas and Miranda for putting this bonus stuff out there. |
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